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Sunday, July 02, 2006

O.k. Time To Get This Blog Back in the Game!

Here's is one of my favorite poems that I have ever written. I had been going through a rough time and I just wanted to lay bare my heart and get out what was weighing so heavily on me. The first stanza is a little rocky, but bear with it, it gets better!!

A tiny soul inside of me
Strives to grow and bloom.
But a problem arises and I can see
That what my soul opens to is a stormy gloom.


This tiny soul inside of me
Is battered in the open sea
For growing, it is to be—
Exposed—in spite of me.


My tiny soul inside of me
Gets lost once it’s outside,
But through its acquaintance from without,
It returns home much refined.


For my tiny soul was never fully grown;
Nor will it ever be.
But it constantly passes through fire full blown,
Leaving dross in the ash and the gold to see.


These journeys that my tiny soul takes
Are full of joy, pain, sorrow and life,
But these journeys only add wisdom and knowledge,
And my sanctified soul emerges through the strife.

2 Comments:

  • At July 03, 2006 9:05 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Thanks for sharing that with us here. I particularly like the line about the dross and the gold. Keep on writing, dear sister! --MAT

     
  • At July 05, 2006 1:35 PM, Blogger Lea said…

    I like how you fully divulge the theme - sanctification - in the last stanza, sort of like a sonnet which has the thesis in the couplet. Nice work.

     

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